6 Characteristics Peer Assessment

12/15/2011

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Hello! For today's post, I would like you to assess my information for my, '6 Characteristics' page . Tell me if I'm missing something, or if you think my information is incorrect. Please make sure you post positive comments, negative comments are not tolerated! Thank you!
-Ammit the Devourer
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Hermonie
12/15/2011 10:21:17 am

6 Characteristics
-Good job you are so organized,great for viewers.
-Maybe add more instead of just a sentence.
-Maybe get some info from the slide show Mr.Hong sent us.
Good job!

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Greg Heffley
12/15/2011 12:14:49 pm

Hi Ammit, I really like your 6 characteristics page. I also really like that you put a picture of an example on each characteristic. All of the information is great! And everything looks likes it is in your own words!

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Mr. Hong
12/15/2011 01:57:54 pm

Please review the slideshow that was shared with you in your google docs and add more information in each of your 6 characteristics. You do not have enough information yet.

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sandy squirrel link
12/15/2011 02:24:08 pm

Hi Ammit!

Great job with your website section for 6 clues. It was really interesting reading the information and looking at the pictures about at the same time!:D

Suggestion- you can say what non metallic or metallic is, it might help the reader if they do not know what it means. You can say also known as shiny or dull. :P

I really enjoyed reading it and it was very entertaining. I also liked how you had put it and fit it all into one single page! Well done and Keep it up!!!!!!!! :P

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