I really like your website! And you make the key words in the page a different color and it makes it really stand out!
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Conan
12/12/2011 05:30:08 am
Ammit the Devourer,I really like your website. You need to change the color of the words. You need to add more details for the Plate Tectonic page. Also, use more simple words.
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Pooh Bear
12/12/2011 11:59:34 am
Hi Ammit! For the rock cycle part of your website I think it has great information, and not that many spelling errors which is great! Some advice I thought to share my opinion, I think the coloured words may look a little crowded. But if you want those words to stand out, I suggest that you could underline those words so it has a formal look. Other than that you did a wonderful job!
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Pooh Bear
12/12/2011 12:20:29 pm
You did a great job on your plate tectonics section. I thought you could put some more detail about the history of the inventor of plate tectonics. You did very good though! :)
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sandy squirrel
12/12/2011 01:27:12 pm
Hi Ammit! For your "Rock Cycle" page it was great although you need to pay attention to grammar. Also I really like the colorful words you have put.. but it is taking the real purpose of your website away, since I was trying to read it my eyes were to distracted to the words that were colorful. Although I loved your idea and I think you can maybe do something else to make those certain words stand out without taking away from the presentation!
For your "Plate Tectonics" page, I feel as though it is a little distracting....but other than that very very informational! Remember these are just suggestions! :D
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Mr. Hong
12/13/2011 02:12:25 pm
@ Ammit - Please check your spelling.
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Im in grade 7, I live in the lower main-land in B.C, Canada.
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