Dear Ammit, I like your transform boundaries but you have to add a little bit of more information because there is only 2 sentences. And for divergent boundaries simplify the words for example hence is a word I don’t really get. Remember these are just examples!
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Conan
12/13/2011 10:41:10 am
Ammit, I really like your website!
There are few punctuation and grammar errors like 'Occasionally earthquakes on the divergent boundaries'. It doesn't make any sense! Also, you need to put 'an' instead of 'a'. Lastly, remember to add comas when you need.
Hi Ammit! Your website is still looking very creative and informational. I have reviewed 2 sections of your website. They are the following sections: Transform Boundary and Divergent Boundary.
For Transform Boundary you did good, although I have noticed that you have not put enough information, please do that!
For Divergent Boundary, you have done great. It is very informational but it seems as though it is not your own words. Great job and keep it up, you had very few mistakes. :D
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Pooh Bear
12/13/2011 12:47:27 pm
Hi Ammit!
You did a great job on your transform boundary section, I don't think you included much informtion though so I suggest you work more on it. Other than that you did a good job! :)
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