Types of Rocks Peer Assesment

1/4/2012

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Hello! Today I would like you to assess my Igneous, Metamorphic, and Sedimentary Rock pages. For these pages please  focus on my grammar, spelling, capitals, etc. Post positive comments,  no negative ones please. Thank you!
-Ammit the Devourer :D
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sandy squirrel
1/4/2012 10:27:14 am

Hi Ammit!

Grammar- Your grammar for all of the the section's you had, were all perfect.

Information- I'm pretty sure you have put it all into your own words, and I feel you have put alot of information. There is the Metamorphic Rock section, where I think it needs a little more.

Capitals- I have seen you make words in full capitals, however, "lava" is not a main point so it does not need to be fully capitalized. Other than that, it is really good!

Punctuation- You need to throw in some comma's here and there anytime there is a breath/pause.

Media- Great pictures, although you can throw some videos in there if you want.

Great job all in all!


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Greg Heffley
1/4/2012 02:16:15 pm

Information:

Igneous: You had plenty of awesome information for the igneous rocks! I also like how you put the types of textures of igneous rocks!

Sedimentary: I really like all of your information it’s very detailed.

Metmorphic: I really like your information but you may want to add a little bit more information.

Media:

Igneous: Your picture is awesome but you may want to add a video.

Sedimentary: Your words on your picture is a bit small you may want to make the picture bigger.

Metmorphic: I like your picture but you may want to add a video.

Grammar:

Igneous: Proper grammar.

Sedimentary: Proper grammar.

Metmorphic: Proper grammar.

Punctuation:

Igneous: Proper punctuation.

Sedimentary: Proper punctuation.

Metmorphic: Proper punctuation.

Capitals:

Igneous: Proper capitalization.

Sedimentary: Proper capitalization.

Metmorphic: Proper capitalization.

Spelling:

Igneous: Proper spelling

Sedimentary: Proper spelling

Metmorphic: Proper spelling




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