Volcano PowerPoint Presentation Peer Feedback

1/30/2012

4 Comments

 
Hello! Today I would like you to blog on my volcano PowerPoint presentation, giving me the questions and comments that you wrote down on your sheets. Positive comments are always the best, so I would advise yo to do so. Negative comments will be blocked an immediately be taken down. Thank you! ;D
-Ammit the Devourer
4 Comments
Conan
1/30/2012 08:02:45 am

You had a good voice level, loud and great hand gestures. But, you read word for word and you sometimes laughed a little bit.
Anyway, it was a great presentation!

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Goddess Athena
1/30/2012 09:26:02 am

You had a really good pace and voice level . Your information was in your own words which is great. But next time you could work on speaking more clear and using more gestures. Over all you did a great job!

Presentation 2- You had a good pace and voice level. I liked how you used gestures to show your information. But next time you could work on not reading from your cue cards as much. Over all you did a great job!

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Mike Tyson
1/30/2012 09:57:35 am

PRESENTATION 1

QUESTIONS:
- no questions

COMMENTS:
- Try not to laugh while you're presenting but I understand you were nervous so it was fine.

PRESENTATION 2:

QUESTIONS:
- no questions

COMMENTS:
Your voice was very clear and your research was very easy to understand and you provided enough information onto each slides.
Try to make more eye contacts because you were mostly looking at your notes. GOOD JOB!!!

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Cleopatra
1/30/2012 01:10:24 pm

Your presentation was great! You spoke loud and clear but you read from your cue cards most of the time so maybe just look up a little more next time ;). Every slide had a great picture. I thought a few slides could use just a little more detail though. Other than that your presentation was amazing! :)

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